走近省考英语作文3--观点建议类

        观点建议类考查角度包括两个方面:1、只提出建议(如How to .../To);(2先发表观点然后提出建议(Some think ...Others think ...In my opinion, ...)。该类别话题广泛,包括安全与健康、学习与生活、传统文化、文明行为等。此类作文通常三段论:(总)点题,指出核心论题;(分)发表观点,介绍理由;(总)呼应观点,号召呼吁。

    常用关联词有: first(first of all), second, also(besides/what's more), finally(last but not least), In short/In a word.


1、只提出建议(如How to …/ To ....

(总)点题,指出核心论题

(分)发表观点,介绍理由----建议1(first/first of all),建议2(second), 建议3(also),......。

(总)呼应观点,号召呼吁。


      说到垃圾分类,有些人还是有点懵。我们的习大大说:“普遍推行垃圾分类制度,关系13亿多人生活环境改善,关系垃圾能不能减量化、资源化、无害化处理。”如果邀请你来进入自己所在社区,介绍垃圾分类的好处。请你根据下图所示,同时提出若干条可行的建议,写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你的看法。词数80左右。


书面表达参考答案:

    Hello, ladies and gentlemen! I'mso honored to be here. Sorting waste is meaningful to our daily life. I wouldlike to share the ideas about how to do it with you all.

    First, sorting waste can save energy. It is necessary for us to reuse some of it, such as using the both sides of paper.Second, sorting waste can reduce pollution. We shouldn't pour non-recyclable or harmful waste directly into the environment. Last but not least, to sort waste is to respectwhat the dustmen do for us.

  I think sorting waste is the mosthelpful way to protect the environment. Actions speak louder than words. Let's have a try!


   




How to Protect Our Eyes

  Nowadays, we are living in thedigital age. Eletronic products make our life more colorful, but they also dogreat harm to our eyes. Protecting our eyesight is now becoming more andmore important.

    To protect our eyesight, first,we shouldn’t watch the computers for too long.We shouldrest our eyes by watching outside from time to time.Second,we mustn’tuse smart phones in dark. It’s bad for our eyes.We’d betterread paper books instead of e-books.Also, We need totake moreoutdoor exercise and eat more green vegetables and fruits. They areall good for our eyes.

As the saying goes, eyes are thewindow of our minds. Let’s take actions, pay more attention to the health ofour eyes and form a good habit. Only in this way, can we be able to enjoy abright future.



我们都应该不忘初心,不畏生活,始终向上。在初中三年中,为成为乐于助人、善于学习、懂得规划的更好的自己,你一定付出了很多努力。请根据思维导图,写一篇 80 词左右的文章与大家分享你的故事。


内容包括:

1.选择两个方面谈谈你的经历和收获。

2.即将告别初中的你,未来打算如何去完善自我,以成就更好的自己。


2018年,福州在全国文明城市创建中取得了好成绩。2019年是成创建全国文明城市(National Civilized City)的关键提升年。请以“to build a civilized Fuzhou”为题,写一篇文章,鼓励同学们为创建全国文明城市做贡献。

内容提示: 尊敬师长,明礼诚信 友善待人,乐于助人

遵守交规,不闯红灯 保护环境(写2-3个例子)

要求: 1.词数100词左右;  2.内容完整,意思连贯,语句通顺,书写规范。‍

参考范文:

                                          To build a civilized Fuzhou

  We are glad that Fuzhoudid a great job in building acivilized city in 2018. As students, what shall we do to keep up the good workin 2019? 

    First of all, we should respect ourparents and teachers, and we are supposed to be polite and honest. Second, it'simportant and necessary for us to be kind, friendly and helpful to others.Besides, we have to obey traffic rules. When we cross the streets, we must waituntil the lights turn green. Also, it's our duty to protect the environment. Wecan't throw rubbish everywhere. To reduce the pollution, we should walk or takea bus to school instead of being sent in a car.

    In short, if everyone makescontributions, our city will be better and better.



为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,请你根据提示,以Safety First为题写一篇演讲稿。字数100词左右。

提示:

1.不带刀具等危险品到学校。2.不独自在河里游泳。3.不与别人打架。4.你的补充观点(1-2点‍)

参考范文

Safety First

    As we all know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. Although our parents try their best to prevent us from danger, teenagers have to learn how to protect ourselves.

    How can we make sure we are safe?First, we mustn't bring dangerous things such as knives to our school becausethese things may cause serious problems. Second, it’s dangerous to swim in theriver alone, so don’t have a bath in rivers by ourselves without our parents’permission. Besides, we should be friendly to others so fighting is notallowed. What’s more, make sure to pay attention to the traffic on our way toschool or home. We must follow the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t crossthe street when the traffic lights are red. Last but not least, if we are indanger, remember to call the police or our teachers for help.

    In short, everyone needs to learnhow to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.


  2、先发表观点然后提出建议(Some think ... . Others think .... In my opinion/view, ...)

观点1+建议1及理由1;

观点2+建议2及理由2;

我的观点+建议3及理由3。


        最近,你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论,同学们就这一话题意见不一,你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息,以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题,写一篇短文。



赞成: 帮助他人是美德; 帮助他人就是帮助自己;

反对:怕陷入麻烦;怕被误解;

你的观点?(至少两点)

要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3)词数:100左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

参考词汇:美德virtue

Should We Help Strangers?

    Recently our class had a discussion about whether weshould help strangers.Different students have different opinions. Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue,and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day.If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them,it's hard to imagine what our world will be like. However,some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness. In my opinion,we should try oou best to help others when they are in need of help,but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness,our world will be full of love.




    近日,某些地区的教育主管部门颁布政策禁止老师们在网上布置作业,你班同学对此展开了激烈的讨论。请以“ Should teachers give homework online?”为题,根据下面的表格信息和要求写一篇英语短文,向《21 世纪英文报》投稿介绍你班同学的讨论结果,并谈谈你的观点和想法。


要求:1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;2.短文中不能出现真实的人名;3.词数不少于 80词。

Should teachers give homeworkonline?

      Now teachers are stopped from giving homework on mobile apps in some areas. There was a heated discussion inour class last week on whether homework should be given online. Differentstudents have different ideas.  Some students think it is helpfulto do homework online. We can surf the Internet to get useful information whenwe have some trouble studying. Besides, homework on-line is colorful, so we can broaden our vision and learn more knowledge. There are also some students who think it's not necessary to give homework online. If we spend much time on theInternet, it's bad for our eyesight. Some of us will play computer games, and then they can't focus on their study, We will become lazy and fall behind. In my opinion, teachers can giveus some homework online. But don't overdo it. So it won't hurt our eyes. At the same time, we should also control our online time.

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