写作|follow-up emails

Part One  讲解笔记

1. hear from 接到某人电话来信的意思

Learn from 是获知获悉

Know from 可以表达获得但是味道不大对

Hear of 是听说

Hear of something from someone 这个是和hear from someone 不一样的

2. 自我介绍后 加半句:I wonder if you would be so kind to allow me to visit , for I would very much like to admire close-up how such a legendary place is run and talk about cooperation possibilities.

3. 陈述请教的理由,这样引出较自然:During the preparation process, I feel confused about ...

4. 具体陈述目前的困难:Therefore, it's a little bit hard for me to... I would really appreciate it if you could give me more introduction of the courses.


以下 follow-up emails:

>you believe you are a good fit for the job

案例背景:求学类-留学导师

                    求职类-行业大牛/人力资源经理/未来老板

                    职场类-合作对象/投资人

1. 通过一个共同的熟人来寻求一些职业建议

Any advice is welcome and I would especially like to hear Andrew's opinions on how to present my training experience to a future employer in person or on resume, just as you suggested.

通用:I understand that Andrew's schedule is probably very tight: hence any amount of help he can give is very much appreciated.

2. 催要面试结果

This is a just a follow-up of my phone call to you yesterday. I am eager to know if we have any updates regarding my application. As I have mentioned, I do consider the Research Analyst (Economist) position quite an interesting challenge and a dream career opportunity. Henceforth it is definitely top on my list. As of now, a couple other companies have been responding to me based on my applications submitted weeks ago.  It would be very helpful to know where I stand with CSSEA to conclude on my conversations with them. I look forward to hearing from you soon, Eric. Thank you so much for the favorable consideration.

3. Job Interview Follow-Up Thank You Letter/ Email

(After a job interview, it's both polite and advantageous for your job search to send a thank you letter. Your note is an opportunity to reinforce your strengths as an applicant, affirm your interest in the position, and if necessary, respond to any concerns that came up during the interview.)

范文1:

Thank you for taking the time out of your busy schedule to talk to me about the Senior Programmer Analyst position with XXX Company.

I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.

适合该岗位 After speaking with you and the group, I believe that I would be a perfect candidate for this position, offering the quick learning and adaptability that is needed for a diversified position.

In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I would bring the technical and analytical skills necessary to get the job done.

I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions are made regarding this position. Please feel free to contact me at any time if further information is needed. My cell phone number is (555) 111-1111.

Thank you again for your time and consideration.

范文2:

It was a pleasure meeting you the other day and discussing the teaching assistant position at ABC Middle School. I really appreciate the time you took interviewing me for the position.

I enjoyed meeting everyone on the sixth grade team, and getting to ask them questions about the teaching assistant position. The more I spoke with you and the team, the more I was convinced that my teaching experience and my passion for small-classroom learning make me a strong candidate for this position.

I look forward to hearing from you next week regarding your final decision. Feel free to reach out to me beforehand with any questions or concerns. Again, my phone number is 555-555-5555.

Thank you again for your time and consideration.


Part Two  Composition

Dear Professor Smith,

Thank you for your detailed instructions on my research proposal last week. I really appreciate the time you took answering my questions and pointing out the orientation of revisions.

I have modified the research proposal according to your advice and finished the first version of literature review. Attached please find the documents. Would you mind checking the logic and structure of my literature review,even better,I wondering if all the previous ideas that I cited closely correlate with my topic. 

It would be very helpful to think clearly for further writing. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you again for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

Sophie Allen

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